Hi Yusuf,
This was a great start to your story. You made excellent use of dialogue and description. Try to think of different linking words. Mrs M
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Hi Yusuf,
This was a great start to your story. You made excellent use of dialogue and description.
Try to think of different linking words.
Mrs M