Hi Abisen, A great start to your story, you described how scary the noises were well telling us they got ‘louder and louder’. Always read you work back to check it makes sense, you cannot finish a sentence with ‘and’; go back and edit this. Mrs M
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Hi Abisen,
A great start to your story, you described how scary the noises were well telling us they got ‘louder and louder’.
Always read you work back to check it makes sense, you cannot finish a sentence with ‘and’; go back and edit this.
Mrs M