wow! I love it ! Just finish of the story . SRINIKA !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Hi Anushka,
What a great start to your story.I really love the way you used lots of description and included dialogue. Next time remember to put speech marks around the words that people say. I enjoyed reading this. Mrs M
Great work Anushka I think you need to ad some pictures
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wow! I love it ! Just finish of the story . SRINIKA !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Hi Anushka,
What a great start to your story.I really love the way you used lots of description and included dialogue. Next time remember to put speech marks around the words that people say.
I enjoyed reading this.
Mrs M
Great work Anushka I think you need to ad
some pictures