Hi Neeha, This was wonderful! I love the way you described Suzy’s feelings and the noises the snakes were making; I would have been scared too! Next time try to use exclamation marks to emphasise. I enjoyed reading this. Mrs M
very nice Neeha..
Great Work I enjoyed reading it and I think Mrs Moore did too Keep this up and you will be a great author some day
BY Zia in 6G in 2017
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Hi Neeha,
This was wonderful! I love the way you described Suzy’s feelings and the noises the snakes were making; I would have been scared too!
Next time try to use exclamation marks to emphasise.
I enjoyed reading this.
Mrs M
very nice Neeha..
Great Work
I enjoyed reading it and I think Mrs Moore did too
Keep this up and you will be a great author some day
BY Zia in 6G in 2017