Hi Savio, This is a wonderful start to your story; you used description really well and Luke sounds like a really brave boy! Next time remember to add in feelings to help us understand your characters more. I enjoyed reading this. Mrs M
Hi Savio, This is scary! next time check if some words are same because it said sabertooth and then sabre-toothed tigers from Falak
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Hi Savio,
This is a wonderful start to your story; you used description really well and Luke sounds like a really brave boy!
Next time remember to add in feelings to help us understand your characters more.
I enjoyed reading this.
Mrs M
Hi Savio,
This is scary!
next time check if some words are same because it said sabertooth and then sabre-toothed tigers
from Falak