Thats a wonderful effort! Please complete the story with a good ending… good job baby…………….PAPA!
thank you PAPA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Hi Srinika, What a great start to your story! You used lots of dialogue, next time remember to put speech marks around the words that people say. Mrs M
thank you very much Mrs Moore!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Hi Srinika I Love your story It is amazing fab work From Neeha
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Thats a wonderful effort! Please complete the story with a good ending… good job baby…………….PAPA!
thank you PAPA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Hi Srinika,
What a great start to your story! You used lots of dialogue, next time remember to put speech marks around the words that people say.
Mrs M
thank you very much Mrs Moore!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Hi Srinika
I Love your story
It is amazing fab work
From Neeha