Hi Rok,
You made a great start to your story here and used speech marks really well. I bet poor Miha was getting really frustrated that nobody believed him. Keep using lots of description to help your reader picture things in their mind.
I enjoyed reading this.
Mrs M
Hi Rok,
You made a great start to your story here and used speech marks really well. I bet poor Miha was getting really frustrated that nobody believed him. Keep using lots of description to help your reader picture things in their mind.
I enjoyed reading this.
Mrs M
I love this story Rok its a bit scary though!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
From Ian ( Dad)
Well done Rok! That story was amazing. I can not believe that his family did not believe him!
From Miss Fan
Hi Rok,
This is amazing 🙂
next time make the font a bit clearer
By Falak
I like it how you have included the whole family in your fantastic story.
from Miha
Hi Rok , love your story, and I am looking forward to finding out more about what happens after the Basilisk appears….
mum Kat x