A great start to you story Angel; it must be really frustrating for Ella that nobody believes her. Keep using lots of description to help me picture things in my mind. Mrs M
Good Work Angel
Neeha Dad
I find angels story very interesting. she has used a great range of vocabulary I love it
well done, Angel! I like the way you have used descriptive words in order to emphasise characters’ feelings. Mrs. Ciobanu
good work and great punctuation
Hi Angel I love your work well don By Neeha
wow! Angel now I never helped you for the great work you did . I was not even next to you!
SRINIA
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A great start to you story Angel; it must be really frustrating for Ella that nobody believes her. Keep using lots of description to help me picture things in my mind.
Mrs M
Good Work Angel
Neeha Dad
I find angels story very interesting. she has used a great range of vocabulary I love it
well done, Angel! I like the way you have used descriptive words in order to emphasise characters’ feelings. Mrs. Ciobanu
good work and great punctuation
Hi Angel
I love your work
well don
By Neeha
wow! Angel now I never helped you for the great work you did . I was not even next to you!
SRINIA