The Golden Rush

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4 Responses to The Golden Rush

  1. Sherleng says:

    Wow, Iā€™m impress with your writing. I would definitely want to hear more about the research on the golden rush ! šŸ™‚ do continue writing!

  2. Mrs P (Team 100WC) says:

    Well done including all five words into your 100WC. It was easy for me to picture everything in my mind. Remember to re-read your work before publishing it so it is mistake free for the reader.
    Mrs P (Team 100WC)
    Wellington, New Zealand

  3. Cath (Team100, Melbourne, Australia) says:

    Hello! An interesting story that didn’t end where I thought it might. You were very creative how you incorporated the challenge words and manipulated your story into quite a different direction. I just love your description of the zebras. Well done.

  4. Miss Pell says:

    Well done for including all five words into your challenge and for including other examples of ambitious vocabulary, this was a very good story. Try to vary your sentence starters in your next piece of writing. Instead of starting each sentence with I you could start with a verb or an adverb, for example, ‘Eagerly, I called my agents’…

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