An amazing poem Liyana! I like how you have used rhythm to create an effect! I also like how you have made a twist in the ending! The only thing is weird , it’s weird,. Anyway be congratulated! From Sara 😉
You have tried extremely hard to rhyme here but do beware of rhyming for rhyming’s sake. Lots of lovely punctuation too.
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An amazing poem Liyana! I like how you have used rhythm to create an effect! I also like how you have made a twist in the ending! The only thing is weird , it’s weird,. Anyway be congratulated!
From Sara 😉
You have tried extremely hard to rhyme here but do beware of rhyming for rhyming’s sake. Lots of lovely punctuation too.