Hi Somran,
I enjoyed your poem, particularly the beginning as the rhythm is strong and you use repetition effectively. I like the question ‘Unknown soldier, who are you?’ as that’s something we all want to know. Thanks for sharing your writing.
Somran your work was beautiful it will attract the reader and a lot of people will be reading your wonderful work.
I really liked the part when you wrote remember,remember all of their sacrifice because it brings lots of effect I really like it
By Sadia chowdhury 5A
somran that was really good you used emotional language and that’s what I like you used creative writing as well your remember poem was good and it was a bit unhappy.
Hi Somran,
I enjoyed your poem, particularly the beginning as the rhythm is strong and you use repetition effectively. I like the question ‘Unknown soldier, who are you?’ as that’s something we all want to know. Thanks for sharing your writing.
Hi Sir/Madam
Thank you I appreciate your wonderful comment
that sentence of mine is my best I think
Your Sincerely Somran
great work somran I like how you put remember , remember the 11th november
Hello Janna
Thank you for reading and commenting on my work!
From Somran:)
wow! I like your neat writing, it has lost of good words
by zia
Somran your work was beautiful it will attract the reader and a lot of people will be reading your wonderful work.
I really liked the part when you wrote remember,remember all of their sacrifice because it brings lots of effect I really like it
By Sadia chowdhury 5A
somran that was really good you used emotional language and that’s what I like you used creative writing as well your remember poem was good and it was a bit unhappy.
Hi thank you
how is this speeking