Wow! What a fantastic ending to emphasise the great sacrifice that people made. I really like your personal detail that emphasises just how horrible things were. Well done.
I will keep the good work up
Wow, this has some truly shocking imagery which really captures the horror of World War I. A wonderful ending.
Thanks’ Mr Evans
wow that was amazing it made me feel like I was really there. Arafah
did you really feel that I was there
thats amazing
hi amina i really liked the description on the trenches. well done, next time use questions to improve it if you have words to spare.
by : lakshithaa suthasan
ok lakshihtaa I will
and thank you
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Wow! What a fantastic ending to emphasise the great sacrifice that people made. I really like your personal detail that emphasises just how horrible things were. Well done.
I will keep the good work up
Wow, this has some truly shocking imagery which really captures the horror of World War I. A wonderful ending.
Thanks’ Mr Evans
wow that was amazing it made me feel like I was really there.
Arafah
did you really feel that I was there
thats amazing
hi amina i really liked the description on the trenches. well done, next time use questions to improve it if you have words to spare.
by : lakshithaa suthasan
ok lakshihtaa I will
and thank you