Wow Arafah ! What wonderfully heartfelt writing, I was especially moved by the image of poor Whiskers as I too have a cat and would be devastated if anything happened to her! Remember to use a capital when you start speech.
Hi Arafah
That was a heartwarming story. The Lord of Nulth has a heart after all. I wonder what his guards thought of him after that.
You have made great use of conversation to tell your story and make everything so real.
There were a couple of missed capitals…see if you can find them.
Well done Arafah! More please….
Greg T
Wow Arafah ! What wonderfully heartfelt writing, I was especially moved by the image of poor Whiskers as I too have a cat and would be devastated if anything happened to her! Remember to use a capital when you start speech.
Hi Arafah
That was a heartwarming story. The Lord of Nulth has a heart after all. I wonder what his guards thought of him after that.
You have made great use of conversation to tell your story and make everything so real.
There were a couple of missed capitals…see if you can find them.
Well done Arafah! More please….
Greg T