Good use of suspense.
It was very detailed and hooked me in . I’m sure it will do exactly the same to other readers.
Hi Shayaan,
I really enjoyed reading this; you used some clever devices to draw your reader in and had a clear message to your story. Next time don’t forget to check your work before you publish for errors. Keep up the great writing. Mrs Moore
nice story the reason for him writing was really good and that he is late for football training your writing was really good
nice story as well as reason
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Good use of suspense.
It was very detailed and hooked me in . I’m sure it will do exactly the same to other readers.
Hi Shayaan,
I really enjoyed reading this; you used some clever devices to draw your reader in and had a clear message to your story. Next time don’t forget to check your work before you publish for errors.
Keep up the great writing.
Mrs Moore
nice story the reason for him writing was really good and that he is late for football training your writing was really good
nice story as well as reason