I love the suspense you have used and your work is amazing
I love the suspense you have used and your work is amazing.
I loved your fabulous vocab and your detail. I could imagine I was there.
Oh wow! Pasapathi I love the way you lulled me into a false sense of security and then slowly built up the tension. Don’t forget to edit before you publish.
Keep up the great work.
Mrs Moore
Thank you
Wow that is amazing
Love the suspense and the dark turn it took. Maybe could have talked more about the bike as this was an interesting part of the story.
good that you went into deep detail
I really like the story
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I love the suspense you have used and your work is amazing
I love the suspense you have used and your work is amazing.
I loved your fabulous vocab and your detail. I could imagine I was there.
Oh wow! Pasapathi I love the way you lulled me into a false sense of security and then slowly built up the tension.
Don’t forget to edit before you publish.
Keep up the great work.
Mrs Moore
Thank you
Wow that is amazing
Love the suspense and the dark turn it took. Maybe could have talked more about the bike as this was an interesting part of the story.
Thank you
good that you went into deep detail
Thank you
I really like the story