I like your story. I like how you tried to make your reader engaged and hooked.
I don’t think you should be using such language such as fricikn hell and dammit hell?
but I did like your story. Darsh
I think this story should not use the word dammit hell and frickin hell. this story is sad
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I like your story. I like how you tried to make your reader engaged and hooked.
I don’t think you should be using such language such as fricikn hell and dammit hell?
but I did like your story.
Darsh
I think this story should not use the word dammit hell and frickin hell. this story is sad