I like your humour it made me laugh. I rate your story 5/5!
I like how u put great description in your story keep it up.
Hi Pasupathi,
I like the way you used dialogue to try and draw your reader in; you punctuated very well. Next time think about how you can use literary devices to link your story together.
Keep it up
Mrs Moore
I like how you continued the story instead of making a new story
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I like your humour it made me laugh. I rate your story 5/5!
I like how u put great description in your story keep it up.
Hi Pasupathi,
I like the way you used dialogue to try and draw your reader in; you punctuated very well.
Next time think about how you can use literary devices to link your story together.
Keep it up
Mrs Moore
I like how you continued the story instead of making a new story
I like how you continued the story instead of making a new story