You have done a great job of describing a Christmas Eve celebration and showing the spirit of Christmas by welcoming the stranger at the door. I do hope it has a happy ending when he takes off his mask.
Well done!
Oh Surabhi, what a wonderful way of leaving your reader hanging on! I want to know what happens next; a sign of a talented writer! Next time remember to edit before you publish as I can see some errors.
Miss A
Surabhi, this is a great story. I especially like the sentence, “I opened the decorated door and saw”.
Keep up the good work.
Tom Smith (Team100WC)
You have done a great job of describing a Christmas Eve celebration and showing the spirit of Christmas by welcoming the stranger at the door. I do hope it has a happy ending when he takes off his mask.
Well done!
Oh Surabhi, what a wonderful way of leaving your reader hanging on! I want to know what happens next; a sign of a talented writer! Next time remember to edit before you publish as I can see some errors.
Miss A
Hi
I loved your title to the story it was very catchy and wanting to read on more!
Form Somran
hi surabhi
what a fabulous piece of writing . I like your title design.
from lakshithaa
I loved your story you used lots of parts of speech
you could have explained more but I enjoyed it
very good .
Thank you for this lovely addition to the 100 Word Challenge, keep up the great work!
Merry Christmas, Nollaig Shona.
Rang Niamh Ireland.