What a lovely slant on the traditional story.
I love the ‘glimpse of red’ and hope it was Father Christmas and not something scary. You leave the reader in suspense.
A super piece. Well done.
Keep up the good writing.
Brilliant Hamza! I love the way you kept your reader guessing about who could have cast the shadow and the way you made such excellent use of descriptive language. Well done.
Miss A
Hi hamza,you have a 100 word
Thank you acouchen
What a lovely slant on the traditional story.
I love the ‘glimpse of red’ and hope it was Father Christmas and not something scary. You leave the reader in suspense.
A super piece. Well done.
Keep up the good writing.
Good work Hamza A , this is one of your best pieces of writing because you have included your vocab. Keep up the excellent work :p
What a great entry! You’ve used some fantastic descriptive language and create an intriguing piece of work. KEep pupi the great work! 🙂
Brilliant Hamza! I love the way you kept your reader guessing about who could have cast the shadow and the way you made such excellent use of descriptive language. Well done.
Miss A
well done hamza you used all five words and your beginning was fabolous