I like how you described her feelings
Interesting story Tea you have added those words to complete the challenge Well done!
great story I think you could add more punctuation but mostly other than that its actually really good
really good work it has lots of excitement in it and It was really fun
I really like your story and I like the way that you used Christmas stories in your writing well done saffina 5h
Tea, an amazing story I can’t keep my eyes off it. The story is very interesting but you made a spelling mistake Rudolph is the correct spelling. Other than that a fab job! Well done!
From Sara
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I like how you described her feelings
Interesting story Tea you have added those words to complete the challenge Well done!
great story I think you could add more punctuation but mostly other than that its actually really good
really good work it has lots of excitement in it and It was really fun
I really like your story and I like the way that you used Christmas stories in your writing
well done
saffina 5h
Tea, an amazing story I can’t keep my eyes off it. The story is very interesting but you made a spelling mistake Rudolph is the correct spelling. Other than that a fab job! Well done!
From Sara