I really like the theme and I also like you used interesting word to make mood in the story, it is a really good tale. Although in the last paragraph I have seen you wrote and the criminal was eaten buy the hunters. Buy = I had gone to buy something from the shops. In this case you would write by. 🙂
From Sara
I really like the theme and I also like you used interesting word to make mood in the story, it is a really good tale. Although in the last paragraph I have seen you wrote and the criminal was eaten buy the hunters. Buy = I had gone to buy something from the shops. In this case you would write by. 🙂
From Sara