Very descriptive writing I like how you used different words to get attention to the reader. I have seen you wrote as he started the king instead of as he started they other then that a really unique tale. 🙂
From Sara
Hello Alima, I enjoyed reading your story. You have used super description. Sweets was an unusual choice to decorate a dress. Would you like one like that? Check that your punctuation is used correctly.
Very descriptive writing I like how you used different words to get attention to the reader. I have seen you wrote as he started the king instead of as he started they other then that a really unique tale. 🙂
From Sara
Hello Alima, I enjoyed reading your story. You have used super description. Sweets was an unusual choice to decorate a dress. Would you like one like that? Check that your punctuation is used correctly.