Hi Sachien
What a descriptive story, you have used and spelled correctly some very long descriptive words, well done.
Next time, check that your text is all the same size, checking your work is very important.
I enjoyed your story immensely and I am now very worried about all the other figures at the rendezvous point, I do hope they all survive!
Hi Sachien
What a descriptive story, you have used and spelled correctly some very long descriptive words, well done.
Next time, check that your text is all the same size, checking your work is very important.
I enjoyed your story immensely and I am now very worried about all the other figures at the rendezvous point, I do hope they all survive!
Sent from Grantham, Lincolnshire.