Hello, Aadeeb. I really liked how you chose the words ‘talons’ and ‘pervaded’ when describing the monster crow. Think about which piece of punctuation or connective should link the two parts of that sentence as a comma doesn’t work here. Well done for taking part in the 100WC this week. Keep on writing!
Mrs Ower
Marbella, Spain
Hello, Aadeeb. I really liked how you chose the words ‘talons’ and ‘pervaded’ when describing the monster crow. Think about which piece of punctuation or connective should link the two parts of that sentence as a comma doesn’t work here. Well done for taking part in the 100WC this week. Keep on writing!
Mrs Ower
Marbella, Spain