Arojan you did a great job here, firmly places your hero in the familiar world of myths and legends, you also used similes well. Remember to check for missing commas. Can’t wait to find out what happens next. Mrs M
You have made an excellent start with your story. I love the similes you have used.
I liked your similes
your similes are so good!
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Arojan you did a great job here, firmly places your hero in the familiar world of myths and legends, you also used similes well. Remember to check for missing commas.
Can’t wait to find out what happens next.
Mrs M
You have made an excellent start with your story. I love the similes you have used.
I liked your similes
your similes are so good!