A very descriptive piece of writing! I really enjoyed reading it, the description fits the name too. Make sure you check your work thoroughly as some sentences need editing.
Olimaran, Flash sounds like quite an interesting hero , who has very special powers indeed! I like the way you gave me detail to influence my opinion of him. Next time remember to check your tenses before you publish
Mrs M
Why was Flash destroying so many things but saving the forest? You’ve made a very interesting character. Proof read your work to make sure the reader will understand exactly what you’re trying to say.
A very descriptive piece of writing! I really enjoyed reading it, the description fits the name too. Make sure you check your work thoroughly as some sentences need editing.
Looking forward to reading more.
Miss Kaur
Olimaran, Flash sounds like quite an interesting hero , who has very special powers indeed! I like the way you gave me detail to influence my opinion of him. Next time remember to check your tenses before you publish
Mrs M
great description try to make sure your sentences make sense
Why was Flash destroying so many things but saving the forest? You’ve made a very interesting character. Proof read your work to make sure the reader will understand exactly what you’re trying to say.