Hi Micah, You used interesting detail to introduce your mythological hero to your reader and made good use of similes to add depth to your description. Remember to edit before you publish Mrs M
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You have made Flesh seem very real. Your descriptions could be more detailed. I would like to know what you, as the writer, thinks he’ll looks like.
You have made Flesh seem very real. Your descriptions could be more detailed. I would like to know what you, as the writer, thinks hell looks like.
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Hi Micah,
You used interesting detail to introduce your mythological hero to your reader and made good use of similes to add depth to your description.
Remember to edit before you publish
Mrs M
Thank you miss for comenting
You have made Flesh seem very real. Your descriptions could be more detailed. I would like to know what you, as the writer, thinks he’ll looks like.
You have made Flesh seem very real. Your descriptions could be more detailed. I would like to know what you, as the writer, thinks hell looks like.