wish: He made a species called icewings could be more interesting e.g He created a new species called the icewings
🙂 The description is extremely interesting e.g His jaws can crush anything’s body whether it is scaly or furry
🙂 I like the extra description that makes the entire piece of writing more interesting
Hi Rakeen,
This is an awesome piece of writing, I really like the way that you used detail to influence my opinion of your character. Next time think about how your organise your ideas
wish: He made a species called icewings could be more interesting e.g He created a new species called the icewings
🙂 The description is extremely interesting e.g His jaws can crush anything’s body whether it is scaly or furry
🙂 I like the extra description that makes the entire piece of writing more interesting
I like your work but maybe you could add more description. 🙂
I like your work but maybe you could add more description.
Hi Rakeen,
This is an awesome piece of writing, I really like the way that you used detail to influence my opinion of your character. Next time think about how your organise your ideas
Frost are sounds terrifying. Try and keep to language which supports this image. Something being” handy” is too casual.
Should read Frostbar