Hi Safaa, You have created quite a fearsome beast for your reader, I love the way you described it’s powers. Next time try to use synonyms to avoid repeating words. Mrs M
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Hi Safaa,
You have created quite a fearsome beast for your reader, I love the way you described it’s powers.
Next time try to use synonyms to avoid repeating words.
Mrs M