Ballack

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2 Responses to Ballack

  1. nanand says:

    Hi Kerem,
    This is another great piece of writing, your clever use of language have created a firm impression in your reader’s mind and have left me wanting to find out more. Try varying punctuation to control your reader more.
    Mrs M

  2. Felixstine says:

    You have created a vivid picture of Ballack. More description of his control of plants would strengthen this piece of writing. Ballack seems to have undergone a massive change of personality. Why did this happen to him?

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