Bloodstrom

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3 Responses to Bloodstrom

  1. mushk says:

    I love the vary of adjectives and sentence starters, tell us why he did these things

  2. nanand says:

    Hi Jervarne,
    You have created quite a fearsome beast and used detail to firmly place him in the world of myths and legends. Keep things simple so as not to confuse your reader.
    Mrs M

  3. Felixstine says:

    Bloodstream has more than two halves. Mathematically this is confusing. I like the idea of crossover from light to dark. Why is he always so hungry?

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