blaze

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  1. nanand says:

    Hi Pavan,
    You have made great use of detail to create a fearsome demon that is firmly centred in the world of myths and legends; I especially love the way you implied things about her character through the way she does things, to influence my opinion.
    Next time try to vary your sentence starters.
    Mrs M

  2. Felixstine says:

    “She greets the with fear ” This a very powerful phrase and really says how awful Blaze is. Your demon is petrifying but you suggest some weakness when you say “she feels this makes her invincible”. I think she should be invincible and your writing should describe this.

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