Hi Sampriti,
I really enjoyed reading this, you made careful use of word choices and figurative language to create a fearsome demon that is firmly placed in the world of myths and legends.
Next time try to vary your sentences starters.
Mrs M
How did Fireblast betray the gods? You’re descriptive writing leaves me wanting to know more! Did you proof read your work? I think you could eliminate errors if you did.
Sampriti this is very descriptive I also like the way you put your charter in hell its really good why not put some similes in this overall very good.
Very nice way of describing the character.
Hi Sampriti,
I really enjoyed reading this, you made careful use of word choices and figurative language to create a fearsome demon that is firmly placed in the world of myths and legends.
Next time try to vary your sentences starters.
Mrs M
How did Fireblast betray the gods? You’re descriptive writing leaves me wanting to know more! Did you proof read your work? I think you could eliminate errors if you did.