Well done Arojan, you included lots of detail to place your character firmly in the world of myths and legends and left me wanting to find out what happens next. Try to vary sentence starters next time.
Mrs M
We really need rare metals for new technologies on Earth, so any demon collecting them would be very scary. I would like to know why Shadow is such a big enemy of Copper.
Copper sounds very unique! You have explained his background really well. Could you add in some more physical features to help us get a better image of him? Why does he want to kill the King?
Well done Arojan, you included lots of detail to place your character firmly in the world of myths and legends and left me wanting to find out what happens next. Try to vary sentence starters next time.
Mrs M
We really need rare metals for new technologies on Earth, so any demon collecting them would be very scary. I would like to know why Shadow is such a big enemy of Copper.
Copper sounds very unique! You have explained his background really well. Could you add in some more physical features to help us get a better image of him? Why does he want to kill the King?
Looking forward to reading more!
Miss Kaur