Well done Zaynab, you described your icy villain really well and used detail to influence my opinion. Next time try to use synonyms to avoid repetition.
Mrs M
I really enjoyed reading your description of Blizzard! I really felt a chill, maybe next time you could tell us a bit more why people would feel scared of him?
Well done Zaynab, you described your icy villain really well and used detail to influence my opinion. Next time try to use synonyms to avoid repetition.
Mrs M
What else is Blizzard made from? I don’t like the cold and I’m sure I wouldn’t like to meet Blizzard. How does being fast help him scare people?
I really enjoyed reading your description of Blizzard! I really felt a chill, maybe next time you could tell us a bit more why people would feel scared of him?
Keep it up,
Miss Kaur