The Demon of The Sea

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4 Responses to The Demon of The Sea

  1. eremi says:

    great maybe put a bit more description in your work! 😉

  2. ranaz1 says:

    Great work Zahra!
    I’ll avoid snorkelling in this sea!
    Mum x

  3. nanand says:

    Zahra I loved the way you ended this, it really left me wanting to find out more! You also made greate use of precise detail to create a clear picture in my mind of your character and influence my opinion on just how disgusting they are; this is the sign of a talented writer! Next time try remember to check your punctuation before you publish.
    Mrs M

  4. Felixstine says:

    What a brilliant word putrid is. It really describes this horrible monster. I think blowing down the whole sea is a bit more than making mischief though.

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