Oh my Amelie, Trish is one scary demon! I like the way you described her physically and her character , using similes well to influence my opinion of her. Remember using a dictionary will help you to be more accurate with your spelling.
Mrs M
I’m glad I’ve never met Trish. I wonder where she lives? I’m not sure if yove made a spelling error when you talk about “ties of gold”, because I don’t understand what you mean by that phrase. Have you used all capitals to say she is shouting at us?
Wow Trish sound’s vicious! I like your choice of similes it makes your writing very interesting. Maybe next time you could think of a few interesting sentence starters to make it even more interesting.
Oh my Amelie, Trish is one scary demon! I like the way you described her physically and her character , using similes well to influence my opinion of her. Remember using a dictionary will help you to be more accurate with your spelling.
Mrs M
I’m glad I’ve never met Trish. I wonder where she lives? I’m not sure if yove made a spelling error when you talk about “ties of gold”, because I don’t understand what you mean by that phrase. Have you used all capitals to say she is shouting at us?
Wow Trish sound’s vicious! I like your choice of similes it makes your writing very interesting. Maybe next time you could think of a few interesting sentence starters to make it even more interesting.
Looking forward to reading more,
Miss Kaur