Oh my Joanna! What a scary baddy Skeltos is! You used description really well here and similes. Next time remember to read your work back aloud before you publish so that you can add in any missing punctuation.
I would not like to meet Sleketos. The black eyes you describe are not something I’d like to see. Think about full stops. They help the reader to know where you want breaks in what you’re saying.
Oh my Joanna! What a scary baddy Skeltos is! You used description really well here and similes. Next time remember to read your work back aloud before you publish so that you can add in any missing punctuation.
I would not like to meet Sleketos. The black eyes you describe are not something I’d like to see. Think about full stops. They help the reader to know where you want breaks in what you’re saying.