THE LOST DRAGON

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3 Responses to THE LOST DRAGON

  1. patrs says:

    I really liked it, you created a picture in my head.
    try to add more commas.

  2. nanand says:

    Hi Roha,
    I enjoyed reading this, you made your setting seem very appealing and your heroines through your use of interesting detail. Next time make time to proof-read before you publish as you missed some punctuation.
    Can’t wait to read on
    Mrs M

  3. English Advisor says:

    Hi there,
    What a great setting you have created, I would love to spend my holidays there, it sounds great! And what interesting heroines. You have missed some punctuation, reading your work back will help you to spot these mistakes.
    Keep it up.
    English Advisor
    Manchester

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