AMY by amelie

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4 Responses to AMY by amelie

  1. nanand says:

    Hi Amelie,
    You have made your setting sound like a really lovely place and made it clear that Amy will be your heroine. Next time remember to check that all your verbs are in the past. Also, remember to start a new paragraph when you change the topic.
    Looking forward to hearing about the dangers of the night.
    Mrs M

  2. English Advisor says:

    Hi there,
    Amy sounds like she has had a tough life, I do hope that things improve for her. I agree with the advice you have been given; always make time to check that your verbs are all in the correct tense and you aren’t jumping between the past and present.
    English Advisor
    Manchester

  3. katea says:

    I will check my work every time I write

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