The element Sea

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4 Responses to The element Sea

  1. nanand says:

    Wow Rehana! Lots of exciting background detail to help you reader understand the setting . Now I want to know more about Demira and what happens next. Remember to check your spelling before publishing.
    Mrs M

  2. English Advisor says:

    Hello there,
    That sounds like quite a punishment for anyone who dares to go against the gods! Lots of fab descriptive language here too. Remember to check your capital letters, I think you may have forgotten some.
    Keep it up
    English Advisor
    Manchester

  3. charm says:

    Its really good description, I can imagine it in my head

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