Hi Kerem,
You have used some wonderful language here to create a clear impression in my mind and made excellent use of figurative language. I also like you use of a question to draw me further.
Some missing punctuation- this is a target for you.
Keep it up
Mrs M
Hi Kerem,
You have used some wonderful language here to create a clear impression in my mind and made excellent use of figurative language. I also like you use of a question to draw me further.
Some missing punctuation- this is a target for you.
Keep it up
Mrs M