Hello Girls,
This was a wonderful continuation of the story; I really liked the way you used simile and description to create a clear impression of things in m mind. Next time think about when you need to start a new sentence as I can see some of yours are a little long.
I really enjoyed reading this.
Mrs M
Hi Mrs Moore,
Joanna: thank you for a lovely reply.
Iva: thank you for replying to us Mrs Moore, I really appreciate it, we will work on our sentences Mrs Moore.
Hi Mrs Moore,
Joanna: thank you for a lovely reply.
Iva: thank you for replying to us Mrs Moore, I really appreciate it, we will work on our sentences Mrs Moore.
Hi jo and eve
THis is good
Maybe do a diffrent tipe of front.:]
WE HOPE YOU ENJOY OUR STORY
Hello Girls,
This was a wonderful continuation of the story; I really liked the way you used simile and description to create a clear impression of things in m mind. Next time think about when you need to start a new sentence as I can see some of yours are a little long.
I really enjoyed reading this.
Mrs M
Hi Mrs Moore,
Joanna: thank you for a lovely reply.
Iva: thank you for replying to us Mrs Moore, I really appreciate it, we will work on our sentences Mrs Moore.
Hi Mrs Moore,
Joanna: thank you for a lovely reply.
Iva: thank you for replying to us Mrs Moore, I really appreciate it, we will work on our sentences Mrs Moore.