Oh my! What a fabulous twist to your story Rakeen! You have used great language, detail and dialogue to draw me into your writing.
Make sure all the words are suitable for the context.
I enjoyed reading this.
Mrs M
Wow! You have demonstrated a good sense of imagination. I thought it was a very creative piece of writing. Very good vocabulary as well and overall managed to keep my attention. Keep it up.
I liked your description.
I liked your descriptive words.
I think you wrote a bit to much.
Oh my! What a fabulous twist to your story Rakeen! You have used great language, detail and dialogue to draw me into your writing.
Make sure all the words are suitable for the context.
I enjoyed reading this.
Mrs M
Ok, next time I will check my work to make sure the words fit the context. 🙂
Wow! You have demonstrated a good sense of imagination. I thought it was a very creative piece of writing. Very good vocabulary as well and overall managed to keep my attention. Keep it up.
I enjoyed reading your story. You also had lot of writing which was good. Your plot was really good and unique.