The wicked blanket

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5 Responses to The wicked blanket

  1. nanand says:

    Hi Maleeha,
    You’ve moved events on well using thought. Try to vary phrases and sentence starters to keep it interesting.
    Mrs M

    • asarm says:

      Hi Mrs Moore
      yeah will do just need to think more about what am going to do with that but overall thanks for the feed back
      and need to do the same for my writing in English.

  2. kudhn says:

    well done this is a very good piece of work

  3. MICAH CHARM says:

    wow that blew my mind rreally good description:D:D

  4. asarm says:

    thanks for all the comments and I will do the same for English I think it helps better anyway if I work with you Mrs Moore

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