;p : great description
;p : good use of suspence
X : grammar
Hi Aman, I like the way you referred to previous events to move events on. Always make time to edit before you publish and check your spelling. Mrs M
Ok I will next time edit before publishing
You should have done more work! There should have been more full stops! I really liked your last sentence!
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;p : great description
;p : good use of suspence
X : grammar
Hi Aman,
I like the way you referred to previous events to move events on.
Always make time to edit before you publish and check your spelling.
Mrs M
Ok I will next time edit before publishing
You should have done more work!
There should have been more full stops!
I really liked your last sentence!