Hi Pavan, You use some wonderful descriptive language but I can see you didn’t edit before publishing; this is an important part of the writing process. Mrs M
That is really descriptive and it is so good!!
That is really good but you should add more wow words to make it more exciting but over all it was really really good
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Hi Pavan,
You use some wonderful descriptive language but I can see you didn’t edit before publishing; this is an important part of the writing process.
Mrs M
That is really descriptive and it is so good!!
That is really good but you should add more wow words to make it more exciting but over all it was really really good