This is an excellent little tale, beautifully written, well done. It made me think of Willy Wonka worlds, Gummy Bears cartoons, Southend pleasure beach in the summer, sweet shops, Hamleys and many other wonderful places. You very carefully structure the use of your 100 words to great effect, I look forward to your next story.
This is an excellent little tale, beautifully written, well done. It made me think of Willy Wonka worlds, Gummy Bears cartoons, Southend pleasure beach in the summer, sweet shops, Hamleys and many other wonderful places. You very carefully structure the use of your 100 words to great effect, I look forward to your next story.