The Grizzly Bear

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5 Responses to The Grizzly Bear

  1. socai says:

    I liked it , it was spooky , but you could of changed the end.

  2. islas1 says:

    I like it because it is very spooky

  3. Secret Book Club Member says:

    I like the way you started this tale, setting it in a real life place where people made and watched scary movies, I enjoyed the build up of suspense as Tom left his house for some fresh air, but, for me,the ending needed to be more scary. I was expecting to see the Giant Grizzly Bear from the film, there in real life! I still enjoyed the tale and think it was well written and I look forward to your next story.

  4. shahm says:

    thank you I like it that you gave me some advice, I’ll make sure it will have some more suspense next time.

  5. chows says:

    I loved this malaika it was really good you should feel proud of yourself!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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