An amazing story you should be really proud of yourself, just make sure it has all of the word , other than that awesome you’ve used all of your imagination.
This is a great tale and it made me think back to The Snow Queen, Beowulf and other stories I read as a child. Make sure before posting that you give your story one final proof reading to ensure no little mistakes have been made which might reduce how much the reader can enjoy engaging with your story. I look forward to your next tale.
An amazing story you should be really proud of yourself, just make sure it has all of the word , other than that awesome you’ve used all of your imagination.
thanks
your welcome
well done Irina I like it when you expand your sentences because it describes what’s happening and always remember to use a full stop
Tanks for the nice comment. I like that you actually said what you liked.
I like it; I like cold ice
This is a great tale and it made me think back to The Snow Queen, Beowulf and other stories I read as a child. Make sure before posting that you give your story one final proof reading to ensure no little mistakes have been made which might reduce how much the reader can enjoy engaging with your story. I look forward to your next tale.
I look forward to my next tale too. Thanks
cool idea my friend!!!!!!!!!!!!!! but you said the word cave too many times
actually you use 3 caves sorry I was wrong
I meant the word caves 3 times