Irina 100 Challenge Story

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11 Responses to Irina 100 Challenge Story

  1. shahm says:

    An amazing story you should be really proud of yourself, just make sure it has all of the word , other than that awesome you’ve used all of your imagination.

  2. ahmez says:

    well done Irina I like it when you expand your sentences because it describes what’s happening and always remember to use a full stop

  3. islas1 says:

    I like it; I like cold ice

  4. Secret Book Club Member says:

    This is a great tale and it made me think back to The Snow Queen, Beowulf and other stories I read as a child. Make sure before posting that you give your story one final proof reading to ensure no little mistakes have been made which might reduce how much the reader can enjoy engaging with your story. I look forward to your next tale.

  5. tangj says:

    cool idea my friend!!!!!!!!!!!!!! but you said the word cave too many times

  6. tangj says:

    actually you use 3 caves sorry I was wrong

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